Short Story Review "The Scarlet Ibis"by James Hurst and an Original Poem by Karthik Sanjaykumar

 Short Story Review and Poem by Karthik Sanjaykumar

Found poem I wrote about the Scarlet Ibis:

There was no sun to be seen, just nightmares.

I clasped Doodle’s throat

as he laid on the red flowers.

It was too late, I was too unhinged, I was red

But not like Doodle.

What my pride had done.

“Wake up, Doodle,” I cried.

Silence was in the swamp.

I remained kneeling beside him from, noon to night.

Dad had to bury him but I know it was me who did it.

The Scarlet Ibis by James Hurst

This story unfolds in a reminiscent narrative, centering around two brothers, the narrator and Doodle, who

is physically disabled. Set against the backdrop of a small southern town during World War I, the tale

delves into themes of pride, love, and the complex nature of sibling relationships. The narrator's pride

pushes him to teach Doodle to walk, swim, and engage in other activities that are physically demanding

for him. Their shared experiences, joys, and tragedies are illustrated through powerful imagery and

symbolism, most notably the scarlet ibis that takes shelter in their garden, drawing a parallel to Doodle's

own fragile existence.

While the story is brief, it packs an emotional punch, illustrating the depth of love and the destructive

nature of pride and selfish desires. The narrator’s inability to accept Doodle’s disabilities and his

relentless push for normalcy leads to a heart-wrenching climax that leaves a lasting impact. I found this

story to be a compelling exploration of the human condition, showcasing how love, pride, and the desire

for acceptance can both bind and break our relationships.

The detailed imagery and well-drawn settings transport the reader to a time and place filled with both

beauty and sorrow. The author's skilful use of symbolism, particularly the scarlet ibis, extends the

narrative beyond the personal to the universal, providing a lens through which the reader can explore the

intricacies of love, loss, and acceptance.

This tale, though set in a specific historical and geographical context, holds a timeless relevance. The

emotional journey it takes you on prompts a self-reflective examination of one’s own relationships and

actions. The way it portrays the struggle between personal desires and the well-being of loved ones

makes it a poignant read that resonates with readers across different walks of life.

I highly recommend "The Scarlet Ibis" for anyone looking to delve into a deeply moving narrative that

explores the complexities of love and the human propensity for both kindness and cruelty. The story’s

ability to evoke a multitude of emotions within a short span showcases the author's adept storytelling,

making it a worthwhile read for both young adults and adults alike.